"Wo bole suraj dekhte hain..." – A visual metaphor for the poem's exploration of perception versus reality.
Literature evolves when new voices dare to speak the uncomfortable truths. In the grand tradition of Hindi poetry, where legends like Dushyant Kumar challenged the status quo, a new generation is rising to carry the torch.
Today, we present the original works of Prasoon Jadon, a 17-year-old poet whose verses resonate with a maturity far beyond his years. His writing does not just rhyme; it rebels. It explores the fragile boundary between identity and societal expectation, echoing the modern angst found in the works of contemporary voices like Abhi Munde (Psycho Shayar).
1. The Mirror of Reality: A Ghazal on Self-Reflection
[cite_start]In this first composition [cite: 1-6], Prasoon strips away the romanticism often associated with nature. Unlike the classic shers that lose themselves in the beauty of the moon, he turns his gaze inward to the "shisha" (mirror) of reality.
He invokes the names of masters—Mir, Mirza, and Faiz—referencing a lineage of greatness that we often see celebrated in classic Urdu Ghazals like those of Khumar Barabankvi. Yet, Prasoon’s ending is a bold claim to his own existence.
"वो बोले सूरज देखते हैं,
वो बोले चाँद देखते हैं।
उसके जाने के बाद हम,
अब शीशे में अपनी जान देखते हैं।
ख़ुद को बहुत देख लिया हमने,
चलो अब थोड़ा अपना जहान देखते हैं।
गुल का गुलिस्ताँ देखा था कभी,
आज शहर का क़ब्रिस्तान देखते हैं।
वो पंडित लोगों को भड़काता है बहुत,
आज उसकी पूरी साज़िश-ए-शान देखते हैं।
मीर, मिर्ज़ा, फ़ैज़ सब बड़े शायर रहे,
दोस्त - आज प्रसून को भी एक पहचान देखते हैं।"
Analysis: The Shift from Beauty to Decay
The transition from "Gul ka gulistan" (garden of flowers) to "Shahar ka qabristan" (city graveyard) is striking. It mirrors the disillusionment of today's youth, much like the emotional depth found in Nawaz Deobandi’s ghazals, where sorrow often outweighs joy.
2. The Unstoppable Spirit: A Nazm of Dissent
[cite_start]If the first poem was introspection, this second piece [cite: 7-24] is pure revolution. It possesses the rhythmic energy of a political anthem, reminiscent of the fiery satire poems written during Indian elections.
The poet uses elemental imagery—fire, smoke, water—to describe a spirit that cannot be contained. This is the definition of poetry as a weapon of resistance.
"तुम मुझे चलने से रोकोगे,
मैं उड़ना सीख लूँगा।
तुम मुझे उड़ने से रोकोगे,
मैं धुआँ बनकर ओझल हो जाऊँगा।
जिस आग से मैं धुआँ बना हूँ,
उस पर पानी डालोगे तुम -
मैं पानी में तैरना सीख लूँगा。
तुम जब ग़लत करोगे,
तब मैं तुम्हें टोकूँगा।
तुम मुझे रोक नहीं पाओगे।
जब तुम मेरी जुबान काटोगे,
मैं लिखना सीख लूँगा।
तुम मेरा हाथ काटोगे,
मैं बाक़ियों में अपनी छाप छोड़ जाऊँगा。
मेरे जैसे हज़ारों को
तुम आख़िर
कब तक रोक सकोगे?"
Key Themes: Censorship and Resilience
The lines "Jab tum meri juban katoge / Main likhna seekh loonga" are haunting. They suggest that art is the ultimate survival mechanism. As noted by the Poetry Foundation, poetry has historically been the refuge of the oppressed.
About the Author
Name: Prasoon Jadon
Age: 17
Language: Hindi / Urdu (Roman & Devanagari)
Prasoon writes to explore themes of identity, belief, and the necessary friction of dissent. His voice is a welcome addition to the growing community at Sahityashala.
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Frequently Asked Questions (FAQs)
Who is Prasoon Jadon?
Prasoon Jadon is a 17-year-old emerging poet writing in Hindi and Urdu. His work focuses on deep psychological and social themes, offering a fresh perspective in modern Hindi literature.
What is the meaning of the poem "Tum Mujhe Rok Nahi Paoge"?
This poem is an anthem of resilience. It signifies that the human spirit cannot be suppressed by force or censorship. It metaphorically uses elements like smoke and water to show adaptability and survival.
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